Comic 15 - MIRACLE (Page 3)

4th Apr 2014, 11:33 AM
MIRACLE (Page 3)
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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James Mulholland 4th Apr 2014, 11:33 AM edit delete
MIRACLE © James Mulholland 2014

Story and lettering - James Mulholland

Art - Mike Bunt

Colors - Armand Jasmin

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woohooligan 24th Mar 2015, 2:04 AM edit delete reply
Nicely done, guys!

Those backgrounds are especially impressive! :D

Only place that feels a little off to me is the sound effect in that last panel. It's so hard to read... for me at least... it's almost invisible actually... I think I'd have gone with putting the lettering as a background element and having it slide in behind the wheel and the smoke and if you did it right, you might even be able to get away with using one of those unusual color blending modes on the text layer like an exclusion mode. I think a less rounded font might also be better for that particular sound-effect. The one you've got has really round, soft edges on the exclamation points, which I think diminishes the sudden-and-loud effect you're going for.

Again though, really nice work overall! :D

p.s. Oh, I noticed your Facebook widget is pushing your content down a little on the page so it's below the fold when I load it in my browser. I'm a software engineer - if you'd like a hand with your layout let me know.
James Mulholland

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